| 青少年英语写作培养（十） |
| 作者：张文龙 文章来源：青少年读书网 点击数： 更新时间：2014/9/22 |
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分析范文的主要内容 Hobby: fishing When: yesterday Where: the Changshan Lake, 30 km away How to get there: in my father’s car Departure time: 7:00 am Arrival time: 8:00 am Things to do: chose a place, got ready, fixed the baits, cast Time to return: 2:00 pm 3.The title of the parallel text 仿写作文题目 Title(题目): Outing 4.What to write: 写作内容 Hobby Outing When Last Sunday Where Shapotou ,100km away How to get there By bus Departure time8:30am Arrival time 9:30am Things to do Slide down the sand slope, rode on the cable car across the Yellow River, float on the raft made of sheep’s skin, rode camels Time to return 4:00pm Writing activity 写作活动 Outing (1)One of the things with my two friends is .We often together during .
(2)we went to Shapotou, which.After a good breakfast we started .later, we arrived, and tickets and the park.First, we climbed to the top of the sand hill and .We did this as it made us .Then we took the cable car . (3)After the picnic, we floated . Finally we enjoyed riding .How we enjoyed the time! But we . Model Passage 16 The Village Hospital The Xingpu Village hospital is a small and average——looking hospital.It is quite an old hospital.There are few small blocks of buildings within the hospital grounds.These low buildings are separated by narrow paths, lanes and badly——kept gardens.The brick walls are dull and dirty——looking.The grass looks very dry.There are a few trees here and there. One day, I visited my friend Lily in the hospital.She was admitted in Ward 5.The ward was quiet and deserted.Few people had come to visit their sick friends or relatives. When Lily saw me , she did not look happy.She looked sadly at me and told me that she would be discharged later than expected.She looked “as pale as a ghost”.The stitches she had during her operation had not been removed.She was in great pain.I could see tears in her eyes.I felt sorry for her. Presentation: 1.Read the passage silently.仔细默读范文 2.Deal with the new words: 学习范文新词汇 ward 病房 average——looking 面貌平常的lane 通道 deserted 无人 be discharged 出院as pale as a ghost 面色非常苍白 stitches （伤口）缝线 3.Another picture of a hospital and the title of the parallel composition:根据另一张医院的图片，仿写作文 The Zhongning People’s Hospital 4.Compare and write the new composition 根据两家医院的对比写作 The village HospitalThe Zhongning People’s Hospital small and average——lookingbig and beautiful lowtall narrowwide brick wallconcrete wall badly——keptwell——kept dull and dirtyclean and bright dryfresh and green quiet and desertednoisy and crowded sadhappy later then expectedsooner than expected “as pale as a ghost”“as fit as a fiddle” tears in her eyessparkle in her eyes Writing activity 写作活动 The Zhongning People’s Hospital Para.1 (controlled) The is a and hospital.It is quite a hospital.There are blocks of These tall buildings The concrete walls The grass Trees and flowers . Para 2 (guided) One day, I visited .She was admitted .The ward was Many people had come . Para.3 (free) complete the story in your own word. . 应用文 Model Passage 1 Boys and girls, May I have your attention, please? I’m glad to tell you there will be a talk on how to write a good Chinese composition at 2 p.m.on September 15, Thursday.The lecture will be held in Room 501 of Teaching Building of our school.It will be given by Mr.Zhang Bin from Chinese Department, who recently wrote a book on how to write a good composition.I think we can learn a lot from it.And I’m sure you’ll be interested in it.After the lecture we’ll have a discussion on the subject in groups. That’s all.Thanks. Presentation 1.Read silently the oral announcement.仔细默读口头通知 2.Write an oral announcement.口头通知的写法 Addressing: (1)Boys and girls (2)Dear friends/classmates The beginning: (1)Attention, please… (2)May I have your attention, please…? (3)In order to… The content: (1)There will be …(2) A lecture will be held … 3.Write an oral announcement according to the following table:按照下面的提示写一则口头通知 A lecture: speaker: Wang Yanbin, just back from England. Time : at 15:00,date.Place: dining hall. Ending: That’s all.Thank you. Writing activity 写作活动 Dear classmates, , please? I have an announcement to make.There will be (time).The lecture will .It will be given by , who .I think .And I’m sure.After. That’s . Model Passage 2 Notice Students of Senior One will have a speech contest “ I Love My School” at 2:30 p.m.Wednesday, September 16 in the lecture hall of our school.All the students of Senior One are required to be there on time. Please take your notebook with you and make some notes.After the speech contest, a discussion will be held in each class. The School Office Sept.15, 2006 Presentation: 1.Read and remember the notice熟读范文 2.Analyze the writing essentials of a notice. 分析写书面通知的基本要素 1)what activity 2)time and place 3)who will be asked to attend 4)what demands 5)who gives the notice 3.Write a similar notice according to the following notes.
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