中学生英语写作培养（十二）

仔细阅读范文并作分析　　2.What to write 所写内容　　Your opinion: against　　Your reasons: pollute the air and water, no fresh air to breathe, no place to have sports　　Your conclusion: not wise to build.　3.Write a similar composition about the construction of a paper factory in your village 用范文的结构、段落和时态写关于在你村建一家造纸厂的反映意见　1)Your opinion: against　　2)Your reasons: pollute water and air, do great harm to crops, have no clean water to drink　　Writing Activity 写作活动　　Dear Head of the county government,　　I am the head of Zhuying Village.Recently　　.　　In our village,.　　Although,　　we do think it　　The drinking water and the air .　　It will certainly do great harm .　　How can we ?　　In a word,　.　　Model Passage 8　　Giving up Smoking　　Now many students smoke and the number has been increasing.It is reported that over one third of the students in a certain school smoke and some even steal money to buy cigarettes.It is really a serious problem for so many students to smoke.　　As we know, smoking is very harmful to our health.For us teenagers, it does greater harm not only to our health but also to our minds.　　Middle school students are the future builders of our motherland.We should devote our time to learning things useful and valuable for our country, for our people and for ourselves as well.So those who smoke should get rid of such a bad habit and form some good ones.　　Presentation　　1.Read the above passage carefully.仔细阅读理解范文　2.Analyze what are written in each paragraph.　　分析各段所写内容　Para1.tells the fact on smoking　　Para2.tells the bad effect of smoking　　Para3.tells what we should do, what we shouldn’t do　　3.Use the same method to write the parallel composition: Saying good——bye to the Internet Bar　　用范文的写作方法完成题为《告别网吧》的文章　　Use the following information:三段写作提示　　Paragraph 1.fact: more than one——third in certain schools go to Internet Bars, do not go to school but stay in Internet Bars, even steal money,　　Paragraph 2.tells about the bad effect of going to the Internet Bar too often　　Paragraph 3.tells what we should do, what not.　　Writing Activity 写作活动　　Saying good——bye to the Internet Bar　Para1.Fill in blanks　　Now many students go on lines in the　　without going to school.The number has been .　　It is said that more than of the students in a certain go to Internet Bars.Some students even do not go to or even steal to go on lines there.It is really a for so to go to the Internet Bars.　　Para2.Complete the sentences:　　As we know, our study.For us students,　　Paragraph3.(Free)　　We students are the future　　.　Model Passage 9　　Dear editor,　　My name is Xu Ming.I am a student living in a beautiful village called Baima Village.Our village lies at the foot of a hill with a river passing by.In the past, all kinds of crops grew well and there used to be many green trees around.Fish in the pond were fit and fat.Everything looked beautiful and it was a nice place to live in.But everything has changed since a paper factory was built near our village two years ago.Every day it pours out a lot of waste water.The terrible pollution has done great harm not only to our crops but also to our health.The crops, trees, even many fish die of the polluted water.And we cannot get clean water to drink.Many people often get ill.We really suffer a lot from the pollution.　　We do hope some measures will be taken to stop the pollution.　　Yours truly,　　Xu Ming　　Presentation　　1.Read carefully and analyze the passage.</p><p>　　仔细阅读并分析范文　　2.Comparison:过去与现在的对比　　In the past Now　　1.crops, trees, fish grew well, 2.a nice place to live in1.crops, trees, fish die  2.people have no clean water to drink,  often get ill　　3.Write a similar letter to editor about a chemical works near your school, using the following information:　　用范文的写作方法，给编辑写一篇文章，反应关于在你校附近建一家化工厂的情况，提示如下：　　In the past Now　　1.green trees and all kinds of beautiful flowers on campus, like a beautiful garden, 2.a nice place to study in1.produce a lot of waste and noise,  2.do harm to health,  3.affect teaching and studying activities　　Writing activity 写作活动　　Dear editor,　　My name is .I’m a student of .Our school is located at .There used to be　　.　　But everything　　Every day　　The terrible pollution .And the great noise from the factory　　.　　We do hope something must be
Yours sincerely,　　Model Passage 10　　Sept.8, 2006Sunday Fine　　Today we visited the Forest Farm and enjoyed ourselves very much.　Early in the morning we met at the school gate and set off at about 8 o’clock.An hour or so later we got to the farm.We were warmly welcomed by the farmers at the gate.The head of the farm showed us around the farm himself and told us about the great changes on the farm.At noon, we had a picnic on the grassland.Then some of us sang and danced, some told stories and others enjoyed the beautiful scenery of the farm.At sunset, we said goodbye to the farmers and left the farm.　　Today, we not only had a good time but also learned a lot from the farmers.　Presentation　　1.Read the passage carefully.仔细阅读范文。　　2.Pay attention to the form of a diary, date and weather at the beginning, then write what happens.　　日记写作形式：日期——天气——内容。　　3.Write a similar diary about a visit to a factory, a school or a company.　　写一篇关于参观访问某工厂、学校或公司的日记。　　4.Some information for writing a diary about a visit to Xiangshan Gouqi Processing Factory.