中学生英语写作培养（三）

读范文，了解对一个国家的介绍应包括哪些方面　(1) location 位置(2) area  面积　(3) population　人口(4) administration 行政(5) famous cities 著名城市(6) history　历史　　2.Write about China (use a map of China)following the example of the model passage.观察中国地图，按照范文的结构、段落和时态写中国简介　　Map　3.Information on China 关于中国的信息　Placethe third largest, one of the developing countries in the world location in the east of Asia,the Pacific on its east coast,15 countries on the other 3 sides　Area9.6million,km2population 1.3 billion　Famous citiesBeijing,capital,2008 Olympics will be held; Shanghai, the largest and most famous　　Historya long history of more than 5,000 years, four famous inventions; the People’s Republic of China was only founded in 1949　Writing activity　写作活动　China　As is known to all, China and it is .The area of China is and its population is .It has and it borders .　China is made up of .Shanghai Beijing .　It is well——known that China   Model Passage 7　An Interesting Animal——Kangaroo　The kangaroo is an interesting animal.It is a mammal.It is bigger than a dog but smaller than a horse.This animal can jump very fast.The kangaroo is usually brown in color.It has a long tail.It moves on two legs.　The kangaroo is found in Australia.It lives in the woods and eats leaves and plants.When it sees an enemy, it will run away.It does not attack man.The mother kangaroo keeps her baby in a pouch in front of the stomach.Although the skin and meat of the kangaroo are useful to man, it is protected by the government.We can teach a kangaroo to box with a man.We can see kangaroo in the zoo.There are also pictures of this animal in books and postcards.　Presentation　1.Read the passage carefully.仔细阅读理解范文　2.Then introduce the panda of China ( a picture of the panda).介绍中国的大熊猫　Title（题目）:  A Lovely Rare Animal——Panda　3.Write about the panda according to the box.根据范文的组织结构、段落和时态，依据下表的提示写作　sizecolorwhere it is foundwhere it liveswhat it eats</p><p>　　bigger thansmaller thanblack/white Chinaforestbamboo leaves　dogbear　Writing Activity 写作活动　A Lovely Rare Animal——Panda　(1) The is aanimal.It is a .It is bigger but smaller .This animal moves slowly but cantrees.The skin is usually in color.It has a .It moves .　(2)The .It lives and .When it Sometimes, it can attack .The mother .　(3)Although　Model Passage 8　　Dolphins　　Dolphins are warm——blooded animals.They are mammals, not fish.They belong to the same family as the whales.Most of them are found in warm seas.The most common dolphins are the Bottle——nosed Dolphins.　　Dolphins spend all their lives in water.They have no legs.They use their flippers and their powerful tail fins to swim.Dolphins feed mainly on fish.Like other mammals, dolphins give birth to live young.The mothers feed the young with milk that is produced in the mother’s body.　　Dolphins are intelligent and playful animals.They are often seen performing in aquariums and amusement parks.They can leap out of the water to reach for the food from the trainer’s hand.They can also ‘walk’ backwards on the powerful tail fins.Scientists believe that dolphins can ‘talk’ to each other using certain sounds.　Presentation　　1.Read the above passage and deal with some difficult words.阅读理解范文，处理生词　dolphins 海豚warm——blooded热血的　mammals哺乳动物　flippers鳍状肢　tail fins 尾鳍　　aquariums 水族池　　2.The organization of the passage.　范文的组织结构和内容　Paragraph 1.tells us what dolphins are　　Paragraph 2.tells us how dolphins move　Paragraph 3.tells us what tricks dolphins can perform　　3.Pictures of sea lions and the title of the parallel text.　仿写作文题目　　Sea lions　　4.New words will be used in the writing.参考词汇　seals 海豹Californian Sea Lions 加利弗尼亚海狮
ashore 上岸 breed 繁殖shellfish 贝类动物　5.Write three paragraphs about sea lions.　写三段关于海狮的内容　　Para.1: what sea lions are　Para.2: how sea lions move, what they eat and how they reproduce　　Para.3: where trained sea lions perform and what tricks they can perform　　Writing Activity 写作活动　Sea lions　Paragraph1 (controlled)　　Fill in the blanks.　　Sea lions are animals.They are .They belong to the  as the .Most of them are found in the colder of northern and southern parts of the .The most common sea lions are the .　　Para.2 (guided) Complete this Para.　　Sea lions spend .They come and .They have no .They use and move .　　Sea lions feed on .Like many other .The mothers feed　　.　　Para.3 (free)　　Sea lions are　　Model Passage 9　　Our School Campus　　Our school has a small, nice campus.Facing the school gate, there is a white office building.To the east of it is an old classroom building, and to the west is a new one, in which there is modern equipment.Inside the new building, there are lecture halls, sound labs and computer rooms.Behind these buildings is a large sports ground, which consists of a running track, a football court, two volley——ball courts and four basketball courts.Around the sports ground are a lot of trees.　　Presentation　　1.Read the passage carefully.仔细阅读范文　　2.Read again and find out how to write a description about a school.重读范文并体会怎样描写一个学校　　3.Try to describe your school.试描述自己的学校　　4.Words, phrases and sentences are often used when writing a description about a school campus.